Monday, June 27, 2011
lets do this , today i decided to walk my dog,i head to prospect park however just as i approach its entrance a stray comes running wild i stood petrified as it barked and jumped with such force , i simply began to quiver and cower at its presence , then an even louder noise pierce the skies . as i looked around attempting to find its source i realize it came from the side of me. then that color was everywhere . it was red a flowing stream of red . now that i have finally calmed down i soon ponder what really took place. it hits me like a ton of bricks, at the side of me a light flashes from blue to red , radios and whistles can be heard . a blue and white car lays to the side of the pavement a man is on the floor screaming. the police had shot the stray in its head. its owner who was being arrested screamed as his pet is ruthlessly killed,
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Shit man that was good. Could use a little polish maybe, but even in the raw there's awesome there.
ReplyDeletewhat...did I just read?
ReplyDeleteEr, is this part of the book you're writing?
I'm not dissin' or backseat editing, not at all, it's just...
I don't quite know in what context I should read this from, 's all.
What kind of dog you have ?
ReplyDeleteii own a cocker spaniel and yes this is gonna be part of my book
ReplyDeleteWow...crazy story. Agree with the first comment though, a little polish needed.
ReplyDeleteAh, it's part of the story. It might need a little work on the pacing, but a good catching start.
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